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11 April 2013

Writing Feedback

We recently wrote to Mrs Casey's Year 11 English class at Feilding High School.  As well as writing a letter to introduce ourselves, we asked these wise high school kids to give us some feedback on our swimming recount writing.  Their replies have arrived!  Here is a lovely letter from Mrs Casey:


And here is a sample of the feedback we received on our writing:

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