Awesome Writing

We've been working really hard on our writing over the past couple of weeks.  We have talked about (and practiced) lots of different ways we can improve our writing.  One of our tasks was to write an advertisement to 'sell' a house.  Have a read of these awesome examples:

Cottage In The Mountains - Tyler

Are you looking for the house of a lifetime? Look no further because this is the house for you. There is a view of the mountain tops from every window in this modern cottage.  It will do nicely for explorers, hunters or people who love the outdoors. With all the space around you, you’ll find lots of walking tracks in every direction.  With the freezing snow reaching your doorstep in the winter and the fresh mountain air in the summer, your kids will no longer be telling you they are ‘bored’. There are no noisy neighbours to bug you in this perfect family getaway.  So get in quick before this great chance disappears.

Up the Mountain To An Adventure - Sinead

This house is for people who can deal with heights, because it is located on a mountain top and is very high up. If you like to see fantastic views, this house is the one for you. There is beautiful, scenic bush that surrounds the house. You’ll have very peaceful days, without any annoying neighbours to constantly bug you. Luckily you will be able to get a great relaxing rest, because there won’t be much noise that will wake you up. But wait there’s more! You have the lovely singing of the birds in the morning sun to look forward too. Buy this house today! This is the perfect house for you and your family. 

Peaceful Lifestyle Available - Mya

If you are looking for a quiet, peaceful house, look no further. This house is perfect for someone who is looking for a modern house, away from the city. With the beautiful waterfall followed by a crystal clear river, and the sound of nature surrounding you, it would be like coming home to paradise every day. This is a very private property with the bush surrounding you. This house has three bathrooms, six bedrooms with ensuites, two lounges, a kitchen and a spa. Once you arrive you will never want to leave!

Tranquil Sea Side House - Jack

Are you tired of your irritating neighbours and want to get away from all the commotion? If so, this is the perfect tranquil home for you. Settled in a sunny location, with no trees or neighbours to block the light, the glass walls on three sides let in an astonishing amount of light. This means you can save an enormous amount of power. If you love looking out at fantastic views, this is the house for you. With its spectacular scenic views looking out to the crystal clear ocean from all four spacious stories, and a refreshing heated spa pool, this house is extremely relaxing. It has an elevator going from top to bottom of this luxurious house.  The surroundings make it brilliant for rock climbing, and if you enjoy fishing, you can fish straight off your doorstep!  So come in quick to claim your dream home, and we’ll throw in an exclusive Mini Cooper for free.  Price by negotiation.