Awesome Writing!

Over the past week, we've been doing some writing about some rather 'unique' inventions!  We have also been learning about persuasive language, and the kind of language we often see in advertisements.  Have a read of these awesome examples:

The Butter Stick - GREER

Do you ever struggle with spreading butter on your daily toast? Are you sick and tired of getting told off for leaving butter on the side of the container? Well we have a solution for you! Use this brilliant invention, the Butter Stick - a handy tool used in the kitchen to evenly spread butter on your toast. Turn the black twisting device at the bottom and start spreading, it’s as easy as that! Not only does it taste delicious, it is refillable. Wait there’s more, buy one now, and get one free for limited time only.

Portable Tissue Station - MYA

Have you ever been caught out with a horrible runny nose and no tissues? If so, this may be the invention for you. You are storing a lot more tissues than ever before and you will never misplace your tissues again! Not only that you are setting the latest trend! Allowing you to walk around in comfort, this invention only includes adjustable straps and light weight material to keep your precious head supported. This genius invention is very portable and allows you to quickly pull it out in any situation without any difficulties! From the feedback from our highly satisfied customers, you will never plan on taking it back.

The Hobo Disguise - HAMISH

Have you ever needed to look cool or hobo like? Then this is the perfect beanie for you! It’s really comfy and changes your entire look! If you have ever tried to grow a beard and couldn’t, then this incredible invention is just what you need! It’s also an excellent disguise! Not only that, but it comes in different colours and sizes. WOW! Also if you spill milk on it, it’s washable. Also call now and get another one for the exact same price.  Call now for more amazing merchandise.

The Baby Wipe - HANNAH

Have you ever been too busy looking after your baby and haven’t had any time to clean? Do you have a problem with a dirty floor and a baby that crawls around on it? Well we have the perfect invention for you! Not only does The Baby Wipe keep your floors spotless, it also keeps your baby entertained for hours! The Baby Wipe comes in a variety of colours and sizes for your girl or boy. The soft mop-like material is glued on the legs and arms of the onesie, and provides a comfortable and safe experience for your child. One of the benefits of this invention is that when your baby is older and lives in their own house, it won’t be a pig sty because they would’ve had a lot of practice cleaning before. The Baby Wipe is suitable for kids that can’t walk yet.